Hora_Do_Mori
i feel like we're running into a future problem here. U introduce cool concepts and things but we pretty much never get to explore those things at any depth because we blitz past them. Makes things seem scattered and unfocused. for example inmo's divinity, what his people are even clothed like, how the city looks, inmo making no attempt to befriend or talk to anyone in his league, and we need more character/personality from our MC