Comments of chapter undefined of The Omnistore System

Wow, the system seems incredibly unreasonable so far, hope it's not like this all the tine

what a rubbish start

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it seems like good writing, I hope in the future there will be an explanation of why he has a system, and how he got into that body, I know it's not often explained in novels, but these things make the difference between a good novel and an average novel

The first chapter sucked me in. The descriptions were immersive and the little tension at the end made me really invested in the MC's fate. Well done!

tftc~~. Nice start.

its my first time i read this novel I liked this . the sence odf humour & the wrijting capabilities are also great . I'm hoping in future i wish i can read many novels. thanks . it's great i also other recommend read this

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Good first chapter!

Namaste Bhai

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The language usage alone is giving me goosebumps

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Urgh it's a system plus cultivation, I'm already in pain, but I'll give a chance maybe it's good?