Comments of chapter undefined of I Have Become a Capable Servant for the Villain

I like your writing style, it's a little troublesome for me when there's too much description and a few dialogue but it's only one person here after all

Interesting start and pretty relatable with our fellows readers xD

Interesting start! However, I noticed the shifting in present and past tense regularly, consider choosing which one you'll use permanently

loving it

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Ok, I'd admit... this is good.

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It feels so good to know that it is twisted It’s not based on the hero but also the villain I’ve added it to my collection for read later 🤭🤭

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short but eye-catching prologue

wanting more , I like it

I'm a fan of novel transmigration stories and anime, and I'm feeling the Raeliana vibes here. I'm looking forward to this story. Btw, added to library.

great first chapter!

love your naming sense ❤️

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