Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto : The Flow Artist

Ehh I'm dropping it here. The unrealistic 2d anime world thing isn't my cup of tea.

Bro you are the first proper fanfic autor to actually tell that babies have black and white vision like omg are you a medical student.

You know, you may want to correct your punctuation. Full stop. not Full stop .?. is wrong. Only use '?'And use 3 dots. Ha... not Ha ..

Not bad

I really don't like how you made other members of the Hatake clan, when it became a clan after Sakumo was given the privilege of being one.

Everything else is okay, you just need to work on your dialogue, because most of the time I don't even know who's talking or when.

tftc~~

no stupid or funny mc please

niceeeee

I thank you for the chapter.

“nibba ?!”