Comments of chapter undefined of Water Bending In Marvel

I think this fan fic should be more detailed if possible. Plus you should start with the Mc being reborn or having access to his memories at a young age around 7. Reason why before he goes into being hero and all that do more pre plot areas where he goes to school, plays sports like slice of life. This is good as it’l allow you to have time to think of more future chapters. For his power I would’v said water bending isnt really good it’s limited how about super strength or some of superman’s power or flash. These are suggestions.

Making your story detailed is good, but remember it's a waterbender in Marvel story so average pace with a lot of events would be the right thing to do. My opinion

Soo he died from drowning from water that came outta nowhere and flooded the mansion???

Why do you have some weird ghost story? If you're just gonna get reincarnated or transmigrated?

Dude, you have talent writing horror story. You definitely should write one

Jared should take less edibles ....

tftc~~~○●

Hmm

I'm not gonna read it. I'm just gonna leave a message. I thought the Mc force was gonna be the conduit force like Delsin Rowe.