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Tumis

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2017-10-24 JoinedUnited Nations
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  • Tumis
    Tumis1mth
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    Interesting story; Transmigration to a cat in Naruto, first time i read this kind of plot. Bad translation. Feels like result of editing a Machine Translated story, rather than translated story. Readable, but some sentence just weird. Chapter 1 to 5 is good, but further chapter needs a lot of editing. Update is, at this time, good World Background... This is a fanfiction. N/A. Character Design... MC just kinda accepted she (or he? idk, refers itself as a she) becomes a cat. Not much going on rn, just MC figuring out to use a cheat System. Oh, and there's gacha. Idk what kind, MC has yet to use it. And a System Shop. Not recommended until further editing done.

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    Naruto: Paws and Whiskers
    Anime & Comics · 8Ashes8
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  • Tumis
    Tumis1mth
    Posted

    Interesting story and nice plot. Good daily updates. Overall, this is a good fanfiction story, only ruined by Translation quality. The translation is... Like Machine Translated, put into Grammar apps, then fixing names. Readable, but have to do lots of auto-correct in my mind. Translator should try to read more non-translated (original) english story to improve

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    One Piece: The Defender of Justice
    Anime & Comics · CosmicKaminari
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  • Tumis
    Tumis1mth
    Replied to Salazarson

    Well, i began to see what you mean by chapter 20-ish

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    Reborn in a daimyo's court-Naruto SI
    Anime & Comics · Drkest
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  • Tumis
    Tumis2mth
    Replied to Tumis

    Oh, just read. This is a translation, no wonder. I definitely think this was not translation with how well written the previous chapters. Wonder why this chapter so drastically different

    Ch 5 Chapter 5 : Maki Vs Tsunade
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    Insect Princess From Konoha
    Anime & Comics · kibishi718
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  • Tumis
    Tumis2mth
    Commented

    Chapter 1 to 4 is alright. But chapter 5 is so bad; The wording, grammar, weird use of she/he.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5 : Maki Vs Tsunade
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    Insect Princess From Konoha
    Anime & Comics · kibishi718
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  • Tumis
    Tumis3mth
    Commented

    I definitely thought this story gonna be Zoro-Kuina bounty hunter group with how they keep saying gonna enter Grand Line after clearing East Blue pirates...

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  • Tumis
    Tumis5mth
    Posted

    If you like OP MC, the one-year-old-body-but-speak-like-old-man-and-can-kill-strong-adult kinda story, then this is for you.Sadly not for me. The writing is nice though

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    Naruto: Hatake's Demon Son.
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • Tumis
    Tumis1yr
    Commented

    A warning on the title like previous chapter would be nice

    Ch 78 Death of Dreykov
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    Phil in Marvel Universe (On Hiatus)
    Movies · ayrus2011
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  • Tumis
    Tumis1yr
    Commented

    Hey, what about the weather? It's important to know what cause such thing and prepare for them!

    Ch 182 MHS - Chapter 180
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • Tumis
    Tumis2yr
    Commented

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    EXP (INFORMATION)
    Others · Hero_MT
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  • Tumis
    Tumis2yr
    Commented

    . . .

    "AND... to the offer of Lord Voldemort... I REFUSE!..." He announced.
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    Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]
    Book&Literature · MisterImmortal
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