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Comments of chapter undefined of The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi

The_obvious_author
The_obvious_authorLv4The_obvious_author

Nice chapter man I hope it continues

Maple
MapleLv11Maple

I like this scenario. Kakashi may be stronger than Hayate but at the start of the story he is less alert and prepared, in addition to having only a small chakra pool and average swordsmanship, which makes him take poor decisions during the fight. Hayate is always very sharp, prepared and professional. Moreover, he is a specialist in the sword. He is in his element, which makes up for a lot in terms of power difference. And Ren's calculated interference gives Hayate more of an edge in this fight. So suprinsingly, they're doing pretty well. However, without his favorite sword, Zabuza will increase ninjutsu attacks. Normally they aren't on the same ground as in the canon, are they ? Which means, no immediate water point to boost his attacks (and no Water Dragon). I think in your fanfic there would be no reason for a second round. In the canon, Haku was intimidated by Kakashi's reputation, not knowing that Kakashi had little remaining chakra, so he shot his needle through Zabuza's neck to come back later and better prepared. But in your story, Hayate has no special reputation. Seeing that Zabuza cannot supplant the duo, Haku will decide to show up directly to aid his master, forcing Ren to actively engage in battle.

Hanni_Baal
Hanni_BaalLv4Hanni_Baal

Nice plan!!!!! Thanks for the chap!

LeonardoDiCaprio1
LeonardoDiCaprio1Lv4LeonardoDiCaprio1

good chapter keep going

malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1malinizgeldii

Tftc. nice use of inventory.

Son_of_the_Sun_God
Son_of_the_Sun_GodLv4Son_of_the_Sun_God

Good chapter

DrakeGrimmhound
DrakeGrimmhoundLv14DrakeGrimmhound

thanks for the chapter

Hellside
HellsideLv2Hellside

Tnks for chap Então é ele? Zabuza Momochi o demônio do gás oculto -sim, sou eu , Zabuza Momochi o demônio do gás oculto

EvilPenguin_666
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Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

SenseiAshirogi
SenseiAshirogiLv2SenseiAshirogi

Hayate died (easily) against Baki, a jonin weaker than Kakashi by quite a lot, in a 1vs1 Hayate would not last long against Zabuza but in 2vs1 why not

FAMHDTVPNG
FAMHDTVPNGLv3FAMHDTVPNG

thanks for the chapter

Khaaos
KhaaosLv4Khaaos

Thanks for the chapter and more

SimplyNovel
SimplyNovelLv4SimplyNovel

Thanks for the chapter. The fight scene was really well done 👍

kinshi
kinshiLv6kinshi

Thanks for the chapter

Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

shinai
shinaiLv4shinai

thx for the chapter

Shadow_reader_
Shadow_reader_Lv2Shadow_reader_

Thanks for the chapter

crouchingTiger
crouchingTigerLv6crouchingTiger

I hope he "kills" them for the exp gain, btw has he already "released" his chakra supressing stats? i always wonder normally he has them active the -50 agi etc?

noamifargan
noamifarganLv4noamifargan

tftc

Sensibly_Lazy
Sensibly_LazyLv4Sensibly_Lazy

Thanks for the chapter