Comments of chapter undefined of Crescent Veil : Chronicles of Intrigue

Fire prologue. I'm hooked. 🔥🔥💕

The first chapter is one of the most important parts of a story and you nailed the hammer on the head. I love it ❤️‍🔥

The language is extremely attractive, off to a great start!

for the first chapter it was good

I think this should work on the synopsis, however other readers tend to skip reading those before starting to read the book so it's probably fine here. Anyway it's a nice start, really catches the interest of the readers.

The start is just poetic, captivating and cryptic. Kudos aurthor, simply beautiful. If this is what the rest of your book is like, I am reading it

This chapter was filled with such pleasant language! The author’s word choice and flow give each passage a literary effect. It’s great at reeling readers in. Amazing start!

Good prologue hooked me into the story 👍 keep up the good work ❤️

Great first chapter!

Loved this prologue! Sounded a bit like something that would belong in a synopsis, but more in-depth!

good

Iconic way to begin 👍

This prologue hits deep🔥

Nice prologue, I really like it!

That was a great prologue. Beautiful narrating!

Whoa! That's what we call a fire hook prologue... thrilled!