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Comments of chapter undefined of As Severus in Hogwarts

NoOne_0419
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novel I don't like ch novel I like ch dropped😅

Sandford_96
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Yeah could of done without this chapter honestly wasn't needed.

GoldenZega606
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It was a good idea of perspective, although I feel that it felt a little short or that something was missing, on the other hand, hopefully you can change the cliché of both fiction and reality, that girls like bullies or abusive boys, Please, even though Snape didn't behave so well, it was all due to past abuse or psychological trauma, caused by James Potter and a bit of Sirius, and seeing how his best friend, confidante and lover stayed with his abuser.

Ethan_Russell_0999
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When will you post the next chapter?

theratking88
theratking88Lv5theratking88

this is a high school love novel ?

Daoist470313
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Me gusta.

Jack_Gilgamesh
Jack_GilgameshLv10Jack_Gilgamesh

Moreeeeee

Mimogi
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Update please

Dao_Master_Penguin
Dao_Master_PenguinLv4Dao_Master_Penguin

Using CHATGBT to fix your grammer and structuring the chapter will go a very long way, it’s also free, google Translate in case of it being written in a different languge followed by CHATGBT will be op

WeedsNsht
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the story is okay 👍 although there are some misspelled words and slight grammar issues, still a good read.

ERICK_SANTOS
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UPDATE PLEASE

ERICK_SANTOS
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UPDATE PLEASE

ERICK_SANTOS
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UPDATE PLEASE

Gamingthegame
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i like it, will you update soon?

Douglas_Ribeiro_6275
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Gostei da história, achei muito bom e com grande potencial para desenvolver uma boa trama, continua 👏👏😁👍👍

Oliver_Roben
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really like the flow,waiting for more chapters...

DragouN
DragouNLv3DragouN

Is Snape not a member of the Prince family? why not look into some inheritance?

DragouN
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Jack_Gilgamesh
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more

Gabriela_Marinho
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I like it! Please update!