Comments of chapter undefined of Isekai Restaurant

Holy cow, just this first chapter was such a fun read! I’m excited to see what the others are like. Only suggestion I have is to comment a character’s image when you introduce them. Keep up the phenomenal work!

I just realized this was only chapter 1 felt like I read 6-10 chapters

The idea isn't bad, but the way the characters appear and blend in is totally confusing.

Holy first chapter is already a blast, hoping for more chappy

Now I finally understand the bad reviews. Just the first chapter and I have lost count of how many worlds got smashed into here. It really lacks the atmosphere of a restaurant though. I can see guests came and went and then repeat with another guest, nothing about food, system, impression, character personality or plot driver.

I know this is unrelated to this work but, when are you gonna upload the "Deal With The Devil"?

The first half was amazing, the second half ruined it in my opinion

Crossedge, welcome to webnovel. love your other fics as well.

Au-Author are you by any chance a god!?

hold up... wait a minute... is this the same crossedge in FF.net!? the one who made the crossrandom snippet where this come from and the one who made my favorite gamer fanfics?!

om my god ....i think that it is the last chapter .......but It is only the first chapter . great work author !!!

Only 1 chapter is already a thousand times more interesting than other Fanfics that I had the pleasure of reading

Author your characters interactions Seems lacking something ??. .. . They all lack Reactions and emotions. ... And wierd .. .. Please use "!?", "!" cause it's necessary for what extent their reaction in a scenario will be. . It's too Bland without it. .. Good Chapter BTW

After seeing the chapter length

You know if the entire fic just keeps this level of writing, I don't think I need anything else to read.

it looks interesting, it's a pity that the author doesn't put much effort into trying to keep the characters' personalities, I think this is the key point in this type of fic, besides that, for the time being at least, the MC is who least seems to be the MC here.. but let's see how the next chapters unfold.

If all of the chapters are like this one then it will be a great read! I didn't even realize I was still on the first chapter as I thought I have read like 10!

Oh man, are you gonna make a continuous updates of this here instead of your snippets? Every single snippets you made was a wonderful read. I was confused why you havent made a standalone of all of it yet instead of just putting it all in one threadmark.

can you add characters from the cuticle detective inaba? just asking.