Comments of chapter undefined of Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

The pet is much stronger than the mc the only thing that makes the mc special is because of his 🥊

Uhm, I have no idea what's going on with multiple electro's and such. I've read from the beginning and have no idea what happened the whole chapter for some reason.

the hero is more useless than the pet

electro doesn't possess superhuman strength enhanced maybe but not superhuman how tf did he tank his and connors punches he MIGHT be holding back but connor?no he wouldn't hold back at all just one hit alone could incapacitate electro

Hello Oink-chan 👋 I've come with good tidings. a tip to power scaling ⚖️ So far the story is good but the part with Sparrow from LOM is not well know to most of us. and the beginning chapters the glove just popped into the story like it's a normal thing. Should you give us a bit context, maybe we can get the gist of things in this chapter. You'll need to give a basic intro to your power set, when Oda write Devil Fruits 🍈 into One Piece, they didn't give the whole fruit backstory. Just enough intro so people can grasp what is DF and it's weakness to not be able to swim. 🏊‍♂️ only later we found out DF awakening and it's weakness encompassing wave emitted by the sea as well as the seastone. 🌊 First rule of OP character storytelling: Don't be a Mary Sue. MC need to deserves their power, not handed over in a silver plater. That's why Ironman & Adam Worlock characters work but Riri Ironheart & Capt. Marvel Didn't work despite the similarly in powers. Your Peter is still early in the story. give it time to grow and train his powers. 🦎 • Super strength - How strong in the scale of 1 to 10. (1 normal, 10 Thanos) • Super Agility - How agile in the scale of 1 to 10. (1 normal, 10 Quicksilver) • High-speed regeneration - 1 to 10 (1 normal, 7 Wolverine) • Super eyesight - 20/20? more?• Heightened Senses - how sharp • Camouflage - Blend in or Refractive optically • Shapeshift - how long it last • Wall crawling - type of surfaces can/not stick 🦖 • Lizard mode : Super strength - How much upgrade in strength in the scale of 1 to 10. (1 normal, 10 Thanos) • Etc²... Then the Sparrow power set with the glove you will have to fill it up yourself since i dunno anything about LOM. But i think that's should be use in very little to none. only at critical time. like you did in this chapter. 👍 i leave it up to you Oink-chan. i just gave an opinion. 😊Make a note 📝 for consistency and up the lvl bit by bit 📈 as time progress.

Amon supremacy 🧐🧐🧐

Thanks for the great chapter

Mannn finally the mc will start taking things seriously and be more cautious cuz wtefff bruhhh

thanks for the chapter

Oink-Kun, why do this to us?

Thanks for the chapter.

peak level creativity in literature hhhhh.thanks for the chapter 😆

Thanks for the chapter

Thank for the chapter ❤❤❤

Once again, thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the Chapter

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Thanks for the chapter!!!