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Nurarihyon_45883dCommentedthere wasn't enough h scenes in the first place. also. get a laptop already. Don't use the family computer.
I also dial down on the h-stuff in the future chapters because it really is embarrassing to write about it...especially when you're writing it in your living room and anyone just keeps passing behind your back XD- Nurarihyon_45883dCommented
Alfred is not chinese, the don't burn money to sent to the dead in the afterlife
Alfred took out a lighter and burned the dollar, as if saying that he's giving his end of the wager to Lucas who was no longer here. - Nurarihyon_45883dCommented
this feels forced. the author didn't build it up. its like an afterthought. Motherbox goes boom and now victor is robocop.
Victor had become a machine...part human...part machine…! - Nurarihyon_45883dCommented
those are hinderens
Even though I can already fly, wings are cool! Wings are justice! - Nurarihyon_45883dCommented
yeah, Thea probably have nausea and just like amateur mountain climbers, she'll get sick and hard to breathe due to altitude.
It was currently still daylight so I flew above the clouds for cover. - Nurarihyon_45883dCommented
"so what do you wanna drink today?" "I've eaten a roasted chicken last week and it's delicious"
"...It's like this, when I was a kid, my mother was killed by...something impossible." - Nurarihyon_45883dReplied to Deadrule_vivek
the writer is the idiot
"...It's like this, when I was a kid, my mother was killed by...something impossible." - Nurarihyon_45884dReplied to Nurarihyon_4588
a kid named Wayne's could be anyone*
"Ah? I-I'm sorry, I didn't mean to…" - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
by this point in time, everyone should know Wayne's death, and non Gotham would have forgotten. the Wayne's are old news, and a kid named Wayne could be anyonea.
"Ah? I-I'm sorry, I didn't mean to…" - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
he will said somethinglike "yeah, thanks kid". Author forgot MC still a kid at the age of 12, 13, 14, 15, 16 while talking with 20 plus to few hundred years old people. sigh~
Since I needed to strike a conversation, I stretched my hand out to help him up. - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
give em Hal
It was time I meet Hal Jordan...One of the best Green Lantern to have existed!..And also one of the worst ones… - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
and then some random persons saw he's answering call from "supes" on the screen.
Bruce is [B-man], Alfred is [Butler], Barbara is [B-girl], Pamela is [Ivy], Lex is [Baldy], Lena is [Luthor Chick]. - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
i knew it. you're Monkey D Luffy!
"Do all men have something like that?" - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
what's this, the little mermaid?
"Yes. I walk here quite often you see. To see what kind of things would wash over from the world outside…" - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
so punny
Diana looked cute tilting her head in wonder like that. Wonder, heh, get it? Cause, Wonder Woman… - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
yes, and usually if any amazonian were to found you, a male. will be slayed.
"Yes, though I am confused about how you got here. There is a magic barrier around this place that would prevent anyone from finding it." - Nurarihyon_45884dCommented
no. you're monkey d luffy. and this is amazon lily
Then this chick is...an Amazon!? - Nurarihyon_45885dReplied to justjohn
super jump
...I crashed somewhere in the Pacific...at least, I think I landed in the Pacific? Maybe? - Nurarihyon_45885dCommented
1 Billion? in 90's money? the Wayne's maybe an old money but still. to much to invest. maybe 100 mil?
"Un! Then I will go ahead and invest 1 billion dollars. Clark would receive 50% of the shares, uncle and aunt would have 24% each, totaling to 98%. As for the remaining 2%, I shall shamelessly split it between me and my big brother." - Nurarihyon_45885dCommented
i knew it. it's not a bus, it's an air bus (private airplane.
The trip to Smallville isn't short but also not too long. The travel time was estimated to take about 3 hours.