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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System

RavenClock
RavenClockLv4RavenClock

But the grammar though Not a single comma in here

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Jack_Gilgamesh
Jack_GilgameshLv10Jack_Gilgamesh

make him heir to slytherin, best way to be a super villain is pure blood with slytherin lineage different from tom riddle's Mudblood.

Gratiz_
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This chapter is so bad it makes me think the author is out of touch of reality like most chinese authors.

HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv4HereForGoodRead

Grammer is just bad

D1vineMonarch
D1vineMonarchLv5D1vineMonarch

Uhm? "Finally after achieving his goals of revenge on the society he died happily while the people that killed him only has despair because of the after math". In the synopsis is that he died happy, and the chapter died unhappy...

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SEEKER
SEEKERLv14SEEKER

should change his name to a star

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

So many trash reviews and not a single proper one to read.

SEEKER
SEEKERLv14SEEKER

i recommend using lovecraftian for his mind like his mind is the universe his memories is azathoth and he got lovecraftian gods and horror that makes people go insane as his defense

Meta0202
Meta0202Lv3Meta0202

the chapter is about nothing

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Rikijo
RikijoLv4Rikijo

Thank you for the update

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Jack_Gilgamesh
Jack_GilgameshLv10Jack_Gilgamesh

thanks for the chapter, get rid of grandma

Daoist9Pvk1d
Daoist9Pvk1dLv2Daoist9Pvk1d

Edgy lol

Rehman_Muneeb
Rehman_MuneebLv4Rehman_Muneeb

yeah ☺️ some thing is good I tired of HP rise or shine or completely darker word of HP fanfic please make mc a villain but nat a villain who kill innocent people [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

Mc transformation

Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

The armor and sceptre

Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Thank for good chapter.

Xedornox
XedornoxLv1Xedornox

Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4Sabaroth_zarkiel

Thank you for the chapter

cyberlector_321
cyberlector_321Lv1cyberlector_321

gracias por el capitulo