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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Family System

Cruchymonster
CruchymonsterLv13Cruchymonster

literally the same chapter as the previous one. come on now.

SoftCrow
SoftCrowAuthorSoftCrow

It was supposed to release two chapters at the same time, but since the webnovel is suck, the second chapter wasn't released :)

Navigator_Ray
Navigator_RayLv4Navigator_Ray

now the author seems to dragging the situation for way too long and this chapter is almost the same as the previous one[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Azen
AzenLv5Azen

same scenario different pov

Ehbon
EhbonLv5Ehbon

This is like the fifth Danzo cliffhanger in a row, I feel like I’m in the Twilight Zone or there’s a glitch in the Matrix or something…

Rage_001
Rage_001Lv4Rage_001

Seriously author !!!! ,, I won't give you my stones for this chapter !!!!!

Simoncso
SimoncsoLv11Simoncso

? This is the rewrite of the previous chapter. I guess you uploaded the wrong chapter author.

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moee
moeeLv5moee

please, one more chapter, I need it!!!

Apollyon_
Apollyon_Lv4Apollyon_

Why would you ever sub to Patreon if you’re just going to get the same 1k word chapter rewritten 3 times?

Superior_HB
Superior_HBLv4Superior_HB

I had hoped that this wouldn't be dragged out with unnecessary chapters and dialogue like "reborn in Naruto with tenseigan "

Superior_HB
Superior_HBLv4Superior_HB

well what a waste of a chapter ...

Obieron_Blck
Obieron_BlckLv4Obieron_Blck

😐 you just rewrote the previous chapter with a little of new element

Timsah
TimsahLv4Timsah

seriously, chapters should be longer. Bit overall keep up the good work, author-san, u got my vote

antpeek
antpeekLv14antpeek

Wow this was a good chapter that I already read but if I have to keep reading repeats … might just stop reading this altogether 🤷🏾‍♂️

rawthentic
rawthenticLv14rawthentic

author i noticed the differences in fugaku talking with naruto, which im assuming occured after he questions himself whether he was at fault for Itachis betrayal. that growth is interesting

guilherme99gc
guilherme99gcLv14guilherme99gc

Seriously, a different pov.

Yleven_Frey
Yleven_FreyLv1Yleven_Frey

Me encanta el fic , pero siento que 3 capítulos deberían ser uno solo, porque aunque sean diferentes puntos de vista la escena no avanza y los capítulos demasiado cortos

Bloodicys
BloodicysLv4Bloodicys

IM FOWKING LIVID STOP DRAGGING CHAPS BRO

DarkSlayer
DarkSlayerLv14DarkSlayer

Dang it, why it always end with a cliffhanger!

One_Of_The_Players
One_Of_The_PlayersLv2One_Of_The_Players

Man you got guts, keep giving us the cliff hangers. You better hope for my sake that I don’t break anything.

daniel_moreno_6105
daniel_moreno_6105Lv12daniel_moreno_6105

Debería subir otro que sea serio

Rim
RimLv6Rim

Why?????