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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Family System

agaxent_1465
agaxent_1465Lv4agaxent_1465

All i can get on this chaper is blah blah blah. ..

DivinePops
DivinePopsLv3DivinePops

Isn't this fanfic moving quite slow? Author should speedup things a lil bit. Although the quality is much better than other naruto fanfics.

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

I’m fine with the overall pace of the story. I like what you’ve written so far. But this chapter didn’t advance the plot at all. It’s just internal rambling. Maybe save these type of chapters to post along with chapters that actually move things along? Just a suggestion. I’m think it would make some of these readers less mad about it. Thanks for the chapter.

ShifuLong
ShifuLongLv3ShifuLong

He would have to take advantage of this moment to put the other clans on his side in order to have the opinion of others in his favor.

Endo_Cero
Endo_CeroLv1Endo_Cero

a little too much internal dialogue, the chapter almost passed in the mind of the mc ..... for the rest ❤️❤️❤️ ps: thanks 😏😏😏

AllenCross
AllenCrossLv1AllenCross

Yeah, in this chapter, absolutely the same information is given in different words, everything repeats, only at the end of the chapter it was said that the last chapters have the status of filler, the plot advancement is simply absent, each chapter is the same thing.

Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

Looool
LoooolLv3Looool

Thanks for the chapter

Jack_Frost_3962
Jack_Frost_3962Lv4Jack_Frost_3962

good chapter

SirJuan_Juan
SirJuan_JuanLv14SirJuan_Juan

Good Chapter 👍

Eleesar_Talcontar
Eleesar_TalcontarLv1Eleesar_Talcontar

Tasha_Williams_0673
Tasha_Williams_0673Lv1Tasha_Williams_0673

Thx

Kameron_Dias
Kameron_DiasLv1Kameron_Dias

Gracias por el capítulo 👍

Rochirush
RochirushLv10Rochirush

Thanks for the good chapter 👍👍👍

daosit2900
daosit2900Lv14daosit2900

thanks for the chapter

jcp1207
jcp1207Lv3jcp1207

Gracias por el capítulo

CrimsonN7
CrimsonN7Lv11CrimsonN7

Looking forward to more