At first its good but when you reach chapter 25 and so on i almost skip many chapters simply bcoz you getting bored reading, unlike other novels every chapter with cliffhanger the desired or excitement for the next chap this novel have none of it. So bland from 30 i jump to 200 chaps but same almost all chapters theres a bland taste .. .

All i can get on this chaper is blah blah blah. ..

This chapter gives me the vibes of a filler chapter.. More on self mc talk..

You think your novel worth to pay? Just 38 chapter and boom pay to read. . Your arrogance is ur downfall. . . Before you made mistake like this you make sure one of your novel was ever completed, , but hey you got a record of novel dropper hehe too bad

Not worth of pass or coins not good not bad novel but the translation is kinda mntl so dont waste pass here

I dont get it many loopholes n every chapter just a frustration to read im gonna stop here . This is my 1st time encountering a novel like this so bad.

From chap 5 i skip up to this last chapter, the story what i can say bland or less interesting.. But anyway if this is ur 1st novel just keep focus on your work and view as readers perspective and see some points i raised..

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