Comments of chapter undefined of Champion of the Sea (Pokemon SI)

Can you decrease the size of the paragraphs? They're too long. Google Translate has a bug* that cuts off the translation when there are a large number of characters in a single paragraph. Have paragraphs with less than 500 characters, avoids this bug and makes reading more fluid.

WATCHED Thanks for the chapter Are you Hard Enough ,A Water Specialist enters the fray

You should probably write in Google docs for spelling corrections. You should get a beta reader who can help with stuff like paragraph length

it was good while it lasted

thanks for the chapter

Love the story concept and looking forward for the next chapter!!!! All I can say is just have a clear idea/main plot of a chapter then work around it. Also, make a outline on main points to have a better story structure and delevopment. Keep up with the great work and you going to do fine!!! The first chapter was great and going by this chapter you have a clear concept as well as good writing style.

This is a very interesting story, I'm excited to see more.

Really good can’ t wait for next ch apter

Sweet

cool concept also will there be a fight in the next chapter showing all of his Pokemon ? Continue the good work

feh ignore the idiots complaining, this is top notch writing. i wouldnt say your paragraphs are too long, it might maybe here and there be in doubt whether it deviates enough from the paragraph topic to start a new one. but better this than webnovel style a new one for every sentence.really hope to see that magikarp with the king gene. just cant get the idea out of my mind of a gyaridos with the king gene going mega evolution. that is legendary tier

Hoping you would release more chapters and not drop this

It been a while since I have read good Pokemon fic . It was really good. Good writing and concept type specialised Pokemon fics are rare especially good ones and you've got great start keep this up you'll do great. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

This is an interesting story.

Great introduction chapter. I am already looking forward to where you take this story.

Interesting

Good first chapter. I'm looking forward to where this story goes.

Good start!!