Comments of chapter undefined of HOTD: The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale
HOTD: The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale
Giver_of_Crabs
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Amazing work, choosing house celtigar is so refreshing and unique, as it expands more on the game of thrones lore, the pacing is good but lengthier chapters to flush out some of the plot points would be appreciated, I would like to say more but at the moment all I can say is this is a 8/10 fanfiction keep up the good work
Thabks for the chapter, it was really fun seeing the interaction between Clement and Corlys. It would be even more fun when Laena eventually claims Vhaegar and Clement claims…whatever hi is meant to claim whether Kraken or Dragon. One thing I hope you can consider is to try a dumb the language a little bit? I love the language but some of these words I have to read the dictionary or infer to know what they mean.
haven't read the book but feels like its way too unrealistic for clement to get a betrothal to laena for just a couple thousand men at most, like she should've been queen and house celtigar doesen't compare, plus she's allowed to tame a dragon, if she's alrdy a dragonrider and she shld alrdy have vhagar at this point then the marriage makes even less sense
