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  • Abyss_123
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    "Yup, and he's a whiny mess over it just like you," Daiki snorted, "I'll tell you the same thing I told him when I was teaching him how to use his power not long ago. Be proud of who and what you are. You should be, being a Jinchuuriki makes you inherently superior to normal ninja from the get go. And if you are proud of it and wear like an armour, it can never be used to hurt you. Don't brandish it like a sword."
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  • Abyss_123
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    (This chapter is dedicated to all those who are alone for Christmas and have nothing better to do 馃憤馃徎)
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thanks for the chap! I would suggest rereading the draft to fix some spelling mistakes.

    Ch 82 82. Nature of the Element
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  • Abyss_123
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    Literally Math IB

    Harry could tell that the pace she chose for the class was far higher than that of the other classes. The frankly insane assignment that Vector assigned was proof of that. Arithmancy, in general, was challenging. The learning curve was very steep and not could follow that.
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thanks for the chapter! A suggestion, you can use AI to correct some of the grammer mistakes in the chapter. While I love the story, the grammer makes it hard to immerse myself in it. Just a suggestion though.

    Ch 81 81. Gods walking among Mortals
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  • Abyss_123
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    He changed it after I mentioned it.

    He had been severely reprimanded for taking such a huge risk. Yet he had succeeded where her fellow silent sisters and even the best of maesters had given up. For that, she owed him a great debt. A debt that she had tried to repay when she had tried to plead with her grandfather to end his exile. Yet the old kind had not budged. Intent on having Aenys learn his lesson, and then the news had come of him claiming a dragon.
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 52 Chapter 51: Dragons at Winterfell
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thabks for the chapter, just one thing that can be worked on is the grammer and sentence structure. I鈥檓 getting a headache trying to read the sentences.

    Ch 73 73. The All-Father
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  • Abyss_123
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    Ah ok, so it鈥檚 just his assumption and z it a clear cut fact then in Harry鈥檚 mind

    It was both amusing and depressing to see how easily the man got away with it. Sure, technically Harry had him by the balls because if he revealed that there was, in fact, a Basilisk, the headmaster would lose a lot of goodwill from the public, and possibly his position as headmaster. But Harry wouldn't risk it; Dumbledore would kill him. He had proven that he was willing to do it when he did it to Flamel and Harry wasn't willing to risk it.
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  • Abyss_123
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    What they said! When was it me ruined Harry knew about the murder of Flamel?

    It was both amusing and depressing to see how easily the man got away with it. Sure, technically Harry had him by the balls because if he revealed that there was, in fact, a Basilisk, the headmaster would lose a lot of goodwill from the public, and possibly his position as headmaster. But Harry wouldn't risk it; Dumbledore would kill him. He had proven that he was willing to do it when he did it to Flamel and Harry wasn't willing to risk it.
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    Yeah, but call me a softie, I just don鈥檛 want a little kid to die. It just makes me uncomfortable.

    I still haven't decided what to do with Hermione. Do I kill her off? Do I have someone save her? Do I leave her stuck in her fake world because she's happy there?
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  • Abyss_123
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    TFTC!

    Ch 126 Chapter 126: Shedding Skins
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  • Abyss_123
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    Save her at least, as annoying as she is, she doesn鈥檛 deserve death. But moving forward just treat her as a side character, not the annoying drama that鈥檚 been going on with her.

    I still haven't decided what to do with Hermione. Do I kill her off? Do I have someone save her? Do I leave her stuck in her fake world because she's happy there?
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  • Abyss_123
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    TFTC!

    Ch 6 Chapter Six
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    Yo, I hope you get well soon! Ik you鈥檙e sick, but I kind of have a shameless request. Later in the story, could you make Harry actually play some of the Melodies he鈥檚 heard on the Piano, I feel that would be so cool! Again, I hope you get better!

    Ch 126 No Chapter Today
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    TFTC! just a couple of things. 1. Is mc the child of Ares or Mars? 2. Is the love interest (if any) Thalia Grace (I personally hope it is) 3. Does MC knowof the plot or is he a reincarnator from another world. 4. How many years older is he to Percy That鈥檚 pretty much it, keep up the good work!

    Ch 5 Chapter Five
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  • Abyss_123
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    TFTC! That end part got me tearing up 馃ゲ

    Ch 125 Chapter 125: Green Pastures
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  • Abyss_123
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    I still can鈥檛 see the actual dialogue.

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  • Abyss_123
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    TFTC!

    Ch 122 Chapter 122: Checkmate
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  • Abyss_123
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    INFINITE TSUKIYOMI!

    "Yes, I created her an ideal world, where she would learn everything that she could learn, where she could practice magic."
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