Comments of chapter undefined of The Forsaken Hero

I think it is well written though the gods seem a bid cliché. I would suggest you look for misspellings, there are not to many, but already one in the second sentence. I think it is bot a big deal later, but the first chapter should be mostly clean I think. I am really interested to see where this goes, thank you dear author.

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The vivid portrayal of Rachel's encounter with the council of gods and her selection as a hero in the world of Enusia captures attention. The concept of cosmic conflict, blessings, and potential powers adds depth to the story. Strong start overall