KingSeyer
I know you pulled the plot twist, but come on, man! Instead of leaving your power early while having the chance to do it like an assassin, why cancel your power when the knife is at the throat and just leave? Boom! No one even reacted. With this, you can assassinate anyone; when they release the one you've infiltrated, use your power and sneak behind them, and boom, knockout! It doesn't work just because she's a normal woman; you're in a different dimension. Say checkmate and it's done, problems solved. Sometimes, I quit books because of such things. Can we get a bit more realistic and pragmatic MC, please?
2nd Amendment Darn Plot twists , Whatever plans Xander boy has for Sylar have more twists and turns than Xander anticipated ,but Xander boy has many questions about the mysterious Eden connection to him. But Xander boy warned you repeatedly about dastardly Sylar ,next time Xander won't be nice next time he's the Psycho killer .Either Eden sticks to her word or he's making an unexpected return trip . Freaking hero complexes ,they don't pay Xander boy enough for this bulls*****. sheesh