Şimdi ilk olarak türk bir yazarin en azından bir şeyler denemesi beni mutlu etti açıkçası umarım kendini yazma konusunda geliştirirsin ilk olarak ağır bir eleştiri geliyor kendini hazırla türksün diye sana kolay davranmayacağım ilk olarak çok hızlı mı ilerliyoruz ne kanka tamam iyi hoş o oldu bu oldu ama time skipleri biraz fazlaya kaçırıp sanki zorla yazdırıyorlarmışcasına hikayenin önemli ve karakter geliştirilebilecek yerlerini atlamak büyük bir hata karakter gelişimi desen hiç yok gibi bir şey direkt karakter böyle böyle diyerek tek bir karakteristik yapıyı ana karaktere aşılamak aşırı sıkıcı bu yazdığın içerikten nereden baksan 250-300 bölümlük bir yazı çıkar yaptığın her bir time skipten farklı farklı hikayeler dünyayı ana yazarın yazdığı dünyanın üstüne yazabileceğin fırsatlar ile dolu bak 6 yıldır falan fanfic vb her şeyi okuyorum yapılan hataları anlarım herkes annesinin karnından yazar olarak çıkmadı kendini geliştirmek senin elinde o yüzden pov unu yazardan okuyucuya değiştirmek çokça pragmatik bakış açısı kazandırabilir gelelim dünya inşasına TBATH'ın dünyası üzerine hiçbir şey eklememişsin okuyucuya hiçbir hayal gücü gereksinimi sağlamıyorsun özel bir haraket yapıyor MC ama bunun nasıl olduğu veya nasıl yapabildiği ile ilgili hiçbir detay yok hiçbir eğitim arkı yok sanki büyülü birisi (senden bahsediyorum) parmağını şıklatıyor ve ana karakter op oluyor hadi ama bunun eğitimi nerede her bir güç parçasını inşa etmesini izlemek inan daha keyifli insanlar sıkılır diye karakter diyaloğunu veya yaptığı ufak maceraları veya en küçük bir normal hayat parçası fanfic e renk katan okuyucuların bagalanti kurabileceği şeylerdir bunlar benim için açıkça göze çarpan şeylerdir canım umarım yazdığım her şeyi olmasa da en küçük bir şey bile senin yazarlık kariyerinde etkisi olduysa ne mutlu bana çalışmalarinin devamını beklerim

The story unfolds at a leisurely pace, and a slight acceleration would enhance the reader's enjoyment. It's challenging to discern whether I've read 9 chapters or 30, as the narrative progresses exceedingly slowly.

Bro, I came from chapter 4, and I'm here for just one suggestion: you can use ChatGPT to improve your chapter to be more like the English language, fixing basic punctuation and other errors. This way, the chapters will be more readable and easier for both sides.

No problem, but next time I hope you can upload a longer chapter, this one was short but concise

For spelling mistakes, you can use ChatGPT it corrects quite well.

MC's way of getting power can be done with the tiering system, with each tier the strengthening price increases, things like master or grand master are illogical and confusing, if the GP has a problem in earning, it can always be opened to the universe or multiverse.

Dumbelldore is proud of you, Xander. It's all for the greater good.

Hehehe I'm glad we can finally switch to the training arc, let's see how much power upgrade it will get

I know you pulled the plot twist, but come on, man! Instead of leaving your power early while having the chance to do it like an assassin, why cancel your power when the knife is at the throat and just leave? Boom! No one even reacted. With this, you can assassinate anyone; when they release the one you've infiltrated, use your power and sneak behind them, and boom, knockout! It doesn't work just because she's a normal woman; you're in a different dimension. Say checkmate and it's done, problems solved. Sometimes, I quit books because of such things. Can we get a bit more realistic and pragmatic MC, please?

I completely agree; I don't want the author to rush the story and diminish the enjoyment of reading, but my goodness, the main character has been stagnant for 20 chapters with no progress. It's as if they're intentionally weakening him by having him stay in the same place for so long. Come on! He's incredibly smart; he could have gone to a police station or a military base and obtained a sniper rifle that fires faster than the speed of sound to deal with Syler. He wouldn't even feel a thing. It's been 50 chapters, and I think he really needs some kind of power-up. It's become excessively repetitive.

MCU is not just these; there are many more technological equipment used in TVA, and technically, MCU should have adopted this technology in its timeline for TVA's technology to make sense. So, the most important thing in MCU right now is whether it has acquired the technology knowledge of a celestial.

Superman doesn't have a specific weakness against magic; it affects him like any other being in the DC universe.

Actually, the situation is like this: In Marvel Comics, there should be two mutants for this scenario. Both of them travel back in time and establish a mutant empire. This empire grows over time, but as humans also start to evolve, a war breaks out between humans and mutants. The leaders of this mutant empire create two viruses, one of them is Sublime, and I don't know what happened to his sister, but Sublime is still alive. The reason Sublime can't interfere with mutants is that the mutant empire created him that way, so it's something that can't be undone.

We know that MC's power is related to another dimension, and it's highly likely that they will also travel to other universes. I'm very excited, man!

Ahhh, I've missed reading this. This book is really addictive, bro.

Could you please increase the length of the chapters? I know you update almost every day, but either I get too engrossed and finish the chapters quickly, or the chapters are short. Maybe you could release two chapters with a two-day interval. But this book is really addictive, and it's progressing slowly.