Socksniffer
What author suggested to you that you show him the people’s point of view when they see the death of the MC, and the point of view should be when there is a connection between the hero and the main characters, such as his death in the world of the dead high school, and how this affects the characters, such as the attitude of the other characters towards Shizuka and telling him that death falls on you Shizuoka And if you find mistakes in my words, I write with Google Translator
the mc's personality is very annoying, not all of it but most of it and the impact of dying is very slight, I'm not saying that he goes into shock but I'm not saying that the impact on him is so insignificant, about the Shizuka's situation I didn't like it at all. that's the only thing that bothers me the idea is very good but you have to be careful because if you kill him too often many people will leave him and the most interesting thing is that the worlds except the second one don't have fanfics. in general it is very good