Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
OmniSpectra
Chapter comments15
Every week new works enter the ranking, and I make a point of reading those on topics that I like. In the first chapters, from desires, transmigration conditions, how OP the prota is at the beginning, from these little things I can already tell how far these works will go, 90% is dropped, but I read it anyway. But there are some, that I simply want to see the end of, even if you take a hiatus in the future, encounter an author's block, please don't give up, this work has a lot of potential. Protagonist has a reasonable strength development with a promising and mysterious future potential, he knows the plot. I want to see the end of this work! Now I will say some suggestions. Make King Vegeta die, keep the queen and become the king, make Vegeta a "godson". I know that the protagonist has already expressed his lack of desire to be the king or to save the Saiyan race, but it will be difficult to fit this into the current state, the protagonist has ties with the people of the planet and simply letting them die out of laziness is not It makes sense, he's already capable of facing Frieza. Him becoming king is inevitable, a warrior race whose system is based on strength whose king's strength is the strongest, they would easily accept him becoming king. But I imagine that future development after Frieza will become more difficult if you follow this route, perhaps if the protagonist labels Earth as Saiyan territory and says it is his private territory, it is possible to interact with the main cast without leaving the Saiyans under his control. command to destroy Earth. I think I've already rambled a lot here, your work is incredible! Regardless of which direction it takes, I will be following!
