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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

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voidd
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It was going good but this chapter is way too summarized. I mean why did you pace up the plot so much in a single chapter.

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Fantasy1over
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this chapter kind of felt like a summary instead of an actual chapter. hope it gets better cause it's pretty funny.

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MBBro
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Why is he so naive and why does he have so much plot armor? They are in a ninja village and any unknown/unexplainable thing is likely to get captured and interrogated, hokage doesn't know that he can teleport, so why hasn't he captured the unknown factor present in his village? Plus there is no scene of him asking anything from the Mc, if he really is such a good boy, hokage would have already squeezed out all of his techniques from him(the pole/staff needs explanation, and his turtle style too), and also u say that he tried to hide from danzo's attention... Bruh, f that, the moment he became the top of his class, danzo had his attention on him. It's more likely that he's living in a dream rather than him being reborn in naruto world

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Hyuga_Tobirama
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Thanks for the chapter

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Beat09
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Thanks for chapter

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Dredd44
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is this the start of mc arrogance ark

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Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

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Breno_7
Breno_7Lv1Breno_7

Seu ultra instinto pra ele, e ja ta inchado para se mostrar.

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Zero93
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Thanks for chapter

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octoberwind
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Thanks

cyberlector_321
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gracias por el capitulo