HideousGrain
i think theres more connection between maria and micheal in terms of love connection, i think it was because the way they are introduced to each other, alice feels like senior, and it feels weird that suddenly she had thoughts like that to micheal, maybe if you put more hints from the beginning that she likes him, i hope you get what i mean, this is my 2nd language sorry for some error
Thanks for the chapters! I don’t even know what to do with all of these hormones going on in this story, but I am really enjoying the tension you are building between them as well as the initiative that Kaleb has shown. Young love is such a fickle thing though. I can’t even begin to predict what will happen, but I look forward to finding out.