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Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fire_Eternal
Fire_EternalLv15Fire_Eternal

I think it is good, he is meticulous enough considering his surroundings and who he is up against. Curious to see what happens next

Kenley_Miller
Kenley_MillerLv15Kenley_Miller

It’ s good im jus ready to get back to the main meal lol

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PaulB_
PaulB_Lv4PaulB_

I'm really disappointed that the author decided to kill Danny

Pyrozian
PyrozianLv15Pyrozian

Ok, it’ been like ten chapters on Danny. Danny is already dead and likely less than one percent of this will matter to the actual story. Can we please get back to that main story?

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Sirius_Siri
Sirius_SiriLv15Sirius_Siri

Yeah he does but it’s unfortunate that Danny still dies. Even with all this effort and skill he still somehow dies.

Krisnan
KrisnanLv15Krisnan

Does it matter if a dead man meets our expectations? he's gone twice over.

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Apocky_13
Apocky_13Lv14Apocky_13

It's good, playing through Danny's experience with the pyramid gives us an idea of what Michael will have to go through with the temple. It's also nice knowing exactly what happened to Danny before he was summoned instead of just "something bad happened and he dead".Don't mind these people with the TikTok attention spans, the pace you're going at is fine. It's like some people have never read an actual book before, flashbacks like this are common. And I hope to read this novel for a while, why should any of the story elements be rushed?

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Forlorn_Soldier
Forlorn_SoldierLv15Forlorn_Soldier

Nicely played Danny. Too bad you won’t live too long.

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cosmik
cosmikLv15cosmik

Good chap

Damerion
DamerionLv10Damerion

This is good stuff, but you could've summed up what happened in 2-3 chapters. You are highkey dragging it, which is making me lose interest.

Richard_Wolfe
Richard_WolfeLv15Richard_Wolfe

to be honest I'd rather not have the snippet with his brother unless it was like a second book detailing his adventure

Muyassar_Muyassar
Muyassar_MuyassarLv3Muyassar_Muyassar

Really sad that he died. I think he’s more interested than his sister.

David_Alo_0189
David_Alo_0189Lv4David_Alo_0189

Really sad that he ddied

Tempuscineris
TempuscinerisLv15Tempuscineris

I am really enjoying this flashback giving us some more information about Danny. I just feel that it is a shame that he has died twice now.Is this book also in the same multiverse as the God's Eyes, Primordial Dimensions, and Spirit Soul?

greatme_one_mail
greatme_one_mailLv12greatme_one_mail

im bored reading this, what chapter is michael

DarkStormSunder
DarkStormSunderLv14DarkStormSunder

I feel like Danny is a great character. His biggest short coming is he didn’t take advantage of the help he provided the Lord he saved to create a better bond with him against the other two. This left him open to treachery. I’m sure they blackmailed the dragonaut lord into joining them.

Zepher_Catch
Zepher_CatchLv13Zepher_Catch

Prepping readers for what to expect at the jungle temple at the same time covering Danny's back story is a brilliant move

Andrew_Zavat
Andrew_ZavatLv15Andrew_Zavat

I am assuming his brother isn't dead and that was the reason he had to hide who he was. I feel like it was a treasure and opportunity he found that allowed himself to be taken to help out Michael. I also think maybe if you weaved part of Danny's background through the story like right after they met the first time or a bit before he left to go on the shuttle or while he was there it wouldn't be such a jarring switch.

Richard_Wolfe
Richard_WolfeLv15Richard_Wolfe

to be honest I'd rather not have the snippet with his brother unless it was like a second book detailing his adventure