HideousGrain
Dude, I'm obsessed with your novel. It's fantastic and the pacing is great. It's not to fast or to slow. I am loving the fight. Its's realistic as much as it can be, though Masked Sabre annoys me. I keep switching between it being his dad or his brother, even though the computer says his brother is fine. Great job dude. Also, more chapters please 🥺
These longer battles definitely add a good suspense because when I read this book one chapter release at a time and get left on cliffhangers it feels like electricity is just coursing beneath the surface. I am always wanting more chapters so if you can write more that's awesome but if not that is ok too. Your health is important and we, your faithful readers shall be here waiting.
Arc is good, I’m really enjoying the length of these chapters and staying interested in the story. Side note though; I feel like giving the emerald leaf team soultraits is crazy. I don’t know how I feel about giving them out but it’s not too bad and I understand that he can’t use them all as well as the fact they are 2nd tier adventurers so they will be able to utilize the soultraits longer and better than other citizens, however, they are the least loyal to Micheal out of the entire village so it feels kind of crazy giving them soultraits rather than people who are with Micheal without needing a push from ”the elders” of another place.