You previously said it would be 13 people to a server, now you are saying ten?? Or are you saying ten people out of the 13 can team up but screw the other three people?

But we don't need brat comedy. It's not even comedy. It is just a person being unreasonable and unrealistic while they know they are doing it.

You say that author but she has been pestering him off and on for a few chapters now so your words ring hollow here.

The story flows well and keeps you reading late into the night well past when you should have gone to bed. The grammar is pretty good but you can see small mistakes here or there and the mistakes don't impact the story much at all.The selfish part of me wishes the update speed was faster but again, that is my own selfish wish. The author still updates regularly at least. I will admit I am worried about how drastically the MC's personality has changed since the book started. He seems to be developing a lot of mental illnesses based on how erratic his actions and thoughts have become.

Rosary, not rosemary. Rosemary is a herb so it can't be wooden whereas a rosary can be made out of wood or metal.

You spelled despair incorrectly. It is NOT spelled dispair.

It's meow, not moew.

Still wanted to in able to is grammatically incorrect. You should have said still wanted to be able to.

Still feel, not still felt.

Banished is used incorrectly here. You should have used vanished in this case.

Please don't. She is annoying. Let her fade in obscurity.

Aurora has been getting on my nerves for a while now. I hope somebody curbs that attitude of hers.

She acts like she thinks Atticus isn't training properly or something by saying he is wasting his talent. She has no idea how hard the MC has worked before even showing up for school so she can chill. Atticus is already improving at a breakneck speed.

Please continue with this novel Author. I really enjoy this story and I noticed you haven't posted a new chapter in a while. I hope everything is ok.

I hope MC moves on from both of them. Sure he did wrong but for them to decide to use manipulation tactics in response is not right either. I just hope MC doesn't date either of those two again and finds a different person to date/marry who is not only respects themselves but is also straightforward and honest and demands it in return instead of using deceit to get honesty.

Thanks for the chapters! Would you be willing to divulge how soon the Goldborne's will announce their relation to Allen? I hope it's soon.

Sleep with one eye open author.

Author, in an earlier chapter you had Zhang Tu explain everything about the Tai Yin Body to Zhang Hai in his memory even the part about copulating and getting a part of that physique but now you are saying you didn't? Do you have dementia or something?

Terrain is something in reference to landscapes and geography. So you using the word terrain here should be wrong. Whatever you are trying to convey you should come up with a better word to convey it properly.

The book is good except for the terrible translations that are barely better than MTL. Makes the book borderline unreadable at times and if I am paying my coins then I expect good quality translations otherwise it is theft. So thanks for stealing from me and everyone else who reads this book.