Comments of chapter undefined of TILL I DIE IVY

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It is fascinating

Good dialogue in this chapter but it has a lot of grammar mistakes. You mainly need to work on using prepositions correctly.

Vivid descriptions, I liked it already!

What a great start!

Wohoo! What Great start!

There's a sense of realism in the way it's describe

This chapter is lovely. I would read more

Oh no, the MC is too strong emotionally. I think it might not be my cup of tea...

Hmmmm. Interesting start. Our FL is filled with too much anger, that is only hurting her at the moment. Let's see what happens next.

Not a bad start at all! I love the effort on the descriptions

The story is good but the grammatical errors might confuse the reader and affect their engagement. I suggest to use 'grammarly'. Its chrome extension will be of a lot of help when uploading the chapters.

very good, long time i have Not Read a book loke this