Comments of chapter undefined of That Time I got Reincarnated as Son of an Idol

it's okay to have other perspectives but it gets really annoying when you get a climax cliffhanger you know aqua getting stabbed.

i think the main problem here is that people didnt get the resolution to climax for quite a while. Maybe it would be better to have this kinda worldbuilding and character development after the climax has been resolved. as i mentioned before it feels like being edged and blue balled. hencewhy people's negative reaction. i assure you if the resolution was done before the character exploration chapters the response would be far better. While I am not a patr3on supporter yet, i would like to implore you to continue your current work as it is good as it is right now. Rewriting would just trigger those dissastified readers even more since you know, after all the edging they didnt get the release they wanted

Dude al just keep going and pls dont stop and maybesome 18 + is fine just saying

pov change is fine but don't do it in the middle of a "climax" and if you do it in the middle of a climax don't stretch it out for to long. I get that you want to expand the world but it's just going to diminished the impact of the conclusion

Man, you're a wonderful writer for all I know. Just keep doing your work and yeah this POV part is boring as well and it's better if it's spreaded in several chapters. Other than that this fic is good and doesn't need rewrite.

I don't mind the povs tbh but you should utilise it better. Don't use change of pov as a cliffhanger. Doing so will kill the suspense for intended cliffhanger. Also try not make 3 parts for a chapter with same pov that is not mc. Mix it up a little by using some other char pov or just merge the chapters, no need to make it three parts of nothing happening.

Yes although it is too long for the side chapter, but I am fine with this. Hope you don't drop it like a stealing heroine, I'm pretty sad because of that.

i think a rewrite should only be done if you think that you can take this fanfic to a new level, if not then you should end this story arc and then improve from there

until chapter 28 it will be like this all the time, Then I'll save first

To reorganize my previous thought to simplify reader aint mad because of the story itself they just mad they havent reached conclusion to the cliffhanger. I am sure none of the negative comments are dissastified with the direction or writing of story itself. Just this aqua getting stabbed cliffhanger. tough it out until chapter 28 or 29 when reaction get unleashed and people will love it

TFTC❤ Not stop, please!

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Look, I honestly think you should continue this as there isn't a lot of Oshi no Ko fanfiction for now, plus there isn't a lot of fanfiction that I enjoy reading so yeah, hoping you find the energy to write this.

Continue writing author and ill always support u as long u dont do ntr netorare. Try not to read hate comments too much and just remember for every hater out there u have a fan too.

The problem author is the time you are using to make these sidestories, as far as I can tell people want to know what happened to Aqua after the stab. But don't misunderstanding those sidestories are good it is just showed them in the wrong timing.

Theyre just mad at the blue ball from aqua's stab not the story itself its just that ot was about to be the climax and then surprise beech cliffhanger with blue balls of several days because of other character pov though i loved the miyako pov

Its been 10 fricken days since the stab, thats 1 big cliff hanger. Would have been fine with 1 pov each for the 3 characters, but getting cliff hanger again and again for 10 days its not fun at all. It feels like getting gut punch then a jab again and again.

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