Comments of chapter undefined of That Time I got Reincarnated as Son of an Idol
That Time I got Reincarnated as Son of an Idol
RazackCh
Chapter comments38
building a story is good, but 7 chapters are only for other people's perspectives,.? this is getting boring, yesterday miyako 4 chapters, then hikaru 2 chapters, now ai? tomorrow may be aqua, ruby, or the stabber who I forgot the name of now, your story is good, the author follows the manga, from now on if AI is still alive then the future may change and maybe this is why the author is dragging out the story because he doesn't know what other arc what did he want to write about? looking at some of the previously written stories the pattern is somewhat similar
Welp got c0ckteased again. But here I am back again despite knowing this is exactly what will happen. Dear Author, your work has been slowly and steadily turning me into a Masochist. This chapter kinda lacks impact cuz its basically what Ai felt and expressed in canon. But for the sake of character building, let us all embrace it for the eventual grand prize.
author cliffhangers and other povs are good for a story ut you have to manage them better in my opinion. you have gicen the last part of miyako pov and then ai, then the main reaction, and after you coul have put hikaru pov and explanation on the matter of the other idol, miyako story with aqua. like this te momentum is ruined for us readers cause you have to understard while you may write this in a short span of time for us more than a week has passed. this is my opinion and i dont say you have to follow it but consider it and make your thoughts on it. the story for now is decent/good but we re still early to give appropriate judgement ovrall
