finally, a month of waiting for the first duel... yei

Did you rewrite the chapter?

eeeeh, sure why, no?

Nooooooooooooo. I mean in the context i understand why he kill then but i still don't like it

I need moreedeee

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May i ask why a chineese name in a japanese enviroment? or this a translate?

A spellcaster deck would be really nice but to be realistic he can't do a dark magician deck. So I will put here some recomendations for the deck of that timeline. Breaker the Magical Warrior King of the Swamp (For fusions) Mirage Dragon (Is basically a lv 4 Jinzo but only for the battle phase) Silent Magician (The effect version that can be special summoned and negate spells)

i like it so far, but one question. What is the name of the MC?

Wow, I can't see flaws in your logic

Why he didn't call satoru a slaker too? He got late also.

Develop if he forget her or something like that, the majority of bad ratings is because the MC is a "Simp". I'm don't care if he is a Simp or not

I mean this fic is no that bad. I think It doesn't reserve de 4.1 rating. The interactions in The chat are pretty funny. But i think that we want to se some delopment character for severus and his development with Lili. Keep going

I mean this fic is no that bad. I think It doesn't reserve de 4.1 rating. The interactions in The chat are pretty funny. But i think that we want to se some delopment character for severus and his development with Lili. Keep going

please continue here.

If you are going to do the fem naruto thing you shoul edit your previous chapters where you mentioned naruto as a boy. Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter, keep going you're doing great

Dude, if you feel like that, take therest now. Think the plot calmly and when you come back you'll be 100% better than forcing you

This is just descriptions, theres no interactions betwen characters and sukuna feels off, like he is not sukuna and just a stalker that can't do anything................................................

not really