Lucien_Morningstar
I liked the chapter, thank you, but please try to make your novel more dark and dark, for example in the future events, try to find an opportunity and kill Bernadette Rozelle, and try to make her father, the Black Emperor Rozelle, know of her death so that he knows (that every action has another reaction) because literally Rozelle during a period His life was fun and fun, and he was rude with everyone, and we should not forget that he was arrogant, and he was invading all countries, and he was the one who started the era of steam machines, which unfortunately the evil gods took advantage of him and considered him a fertile ground for them to spread their ideas and their believers with, and we must not forget that he He also started the era of exploration and the era of colonization, in a more precise sense. Rozelle was the first cause of the suffering of the peoples of the southern continent from use. Please try to make the matter more dark and tragic for each of Rozelle's descendants, and for Rozelle personally, let him see his offspring killing one after the other, and the same thing with The Earl Hall family let life become more tragic until Audrey Hall awakens from her rosy, unrealistic dreams.
Personally, I am curious about how the author can make the work more dark and tragic?? I liked the Hall family's reaction to the death of Albert (Audrey's brother), but my question now is, does the author have plans to make the lives of Rozelle's grandchildren darker and more terrifying? We must not forget that Rozelle was the first cause of the suffering of the peoples of the southern continent, because he personally explored the road linking the northern and southern continent, and he is the one who started the era of colonialism, and he also started the era of the steam engines, which was the first reason for the spread of believers in evil gods due to bad conditions Also, the author must forget the reaction of the ruling Lewin family. Please, we want to see their reaction to the collapse of their plan to turn George V into the Black Emperor. . . And if possible, we want Shio and Force to go through Audrey's same dark feelings and despair, because they work within the intelligence circles of the Kingdom of Lewin.