Comments of chapter undefined of Gene System

if you give your Mc a systembthen also give the antagonist one so they also can have a fighting chance unless your planning on him fighting the order generation 😉.coz only him having a system sucks

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Nice introduction to your book. I like the contrasting personalities of the MC and the new person he meets.

Nice starting, I'm on for the mechanical designs xD

Nice chapter... can't keep waiting to read more of your story... 🙂

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Good long enjoyable chapter

Very very good first chapter, literally better than most WN products here just chewed out. Blake is an interesting character and was very well written giving colorful descriptions. A scifi done perfect and easily makes me want to continue reading. Thank you for the page! I am excited for the next to come.

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