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Elementary519

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Hi, everyone great to be here. Feel free to review me and read my story, Presley. You'll enjoy it I promise

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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5191mth
    Replied to Kat_Mabis

    Thank you for your kind words and I will do a reread to fix the grammar mistakes. As someone who prefers maths as a subject, I will always be working on grammar. Glad you were able to enjoy the story and when you do become a doctor hope you remember this story and check the accuracy of it.

    Presley
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5192mth
    Posted

    I've only read the first three chapters of the story and it really interesting that it shows more of the cons of life through the MC perception. She lost someone who was close to her in the process of achieving this new society and hopefully will be given the opportunity to take action which you can tell from the outset will lead up to her going against her own remaining family. So if you want a female lead, action and adventure story I recommend it.

    A World Of Women
    Urban · Katleho Mabindisa
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5197mth
    Replied to Daoist2Ixbeg

    Oh thank you so much and yes it is allowed to share from Webnovel. I hope it gets more readers also

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    Presley
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Replied to alu_sachi

    Thank you so much for your words of encouragement and I'm glad your enjoying it. :) I value your support and you're in for a lot of twist and turns in this story will update again soon

    Presley
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
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    You clearly care about your novel and its seen by the amount of work you put in to this survival story. Five stars from me and I hope your story fanbase only continues to grow

    *Survival* dropped.
    Eastern · alu_sachi
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Replied to Rosewater15

    Yeah true some start quite early even the one who is talking but his friend wasn't so adventurous.

    "Rebellious well no, I wouldn't call it that but I think I'm old enough now to handle coffee," Presley answered Mitchum and started dragging the box that they had just set down to add to the stack that was already there.
    Presley
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Replied to Rosewater15

    I've been told that it starts slow and thats ok there are story types for everyone. But it does pick up pace like you wouldn't believe. Thanks for the review :)

    Presley
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Posted

    Your right this novel can be confusing at first but you have to really stick with it. First time I read a novel with this concept but the plot is really gripping so you want to read more cause of how you wrote it. Good job and keep it up, author

    Letters of Compunction
    Fantasy · Rosewater15
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Replied to Husniya_S

    Yr welcome :) Keep up the good work

    Contract Gone Wrong: My Ex-husband Is My Boss
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Posted

    This is a great book from the beginning and each chapter is filled with something new about the characters. 5 stars from me as I genuinely enjoyed it.

    Contract Gone Wrong: My Ex-husband Is My Boss
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Commented

    Personally, I think everything I've read about him so far seems a bit off lol. The guy is seriously in need of some rest

    "Won't you ask about your father?" The woman's eyes followed her son's back and she frowned. Something about him seemed a bit off. The workload shouldn't possibly make her son moody. He'd taken up heavier tasks in the past without complaining.
    Contract Gone Wrong: My Ex-husband Is My Boss
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Replied to Husniya_S

    Thanks for the feedback will look into that sentence structure part and I appreciate the five stars rating :)

    Presley
    Eastern · Elementary519
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary5199mth
    Replied to ShyEdward

    I'm glad to hear that its enjoyable for you, it gets better and more interesting as you get deeper into the story. Thanks for your review

    Presley
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary51910mth
    Commented

    That person saying that at the end had to be a best friend lol. Nice first chapter btw

      I finished my breakfast and put my lunchbox in the bag. "Bye" I said and hugged my mom and Dad and left. My school was in 8-10 mins walking distance. After 2 minutes, I heard a voice from back. "Why didn't you call me before you left you idiot?" 
    The Fantastic five ( Will be moved to a new link)
    Teen · prajnya_shriyan
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary51910mth
    Commented

    Lol I've said this

    She threw an accusing glare at Yuri. "No, I flew down," she replied sarcastically, changing into her bakery uniform and packing her hair as well.
    Girl Of Cinder
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary51910mth
    Posted

    The title of the book alone is intriguing but as you read the story it's really good work on the author's part. The flashbacks are vivid and the dialogue is natural for the characters who I believe to be Japanese. The internal struggles of each character unfold in a tasteful way showing the author is really good at pacing. Great work, keep it up!

    Girl Of Cinder
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary51910mth
    Commented

    Sounds like he has a habit of jumping in to protect people

    "Anata o chichioya (your father is back), you should also get some rest. I'll see if I can persuade him to give you a week off from the station. Please stop jumping in to save people impulsively. The last time you did that, you took a bullet wound to your right shoulder. I can't lose my only child when he's not even gotten a girlfriend or even given me a child." Mrs. Noguchi dramatically cried out, trying to persuade Kei to leave the police force.
    Girl Of Cinder
    Urban · trinit33
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary51910mth
    Commented

    Well she is a part of the country so in a way I think he did do what he had sworn to do

    The traffic was kind of terrible on the way home. Kei looked out his window, wondering why he'd rushed in to save her. He'd sworn to protect his country when he'd taken the police officers' oath during his graduation. Despite that, he jumped in front of a moving trailer, which wasn't what he had sworn to.
    Girl Of Cinder
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary51910mth
    Replied to Trinit33

    Thank you so much for your review. Yes their personalities are opposite and that is what leads to misunderstandings but adds to each charaters charm and I'm glad you appreciate the descriptions :)

    Presley
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  • Elementary519
    Elementary51910mth
    Replied to redlady

    Not really I just thought about why would he ask her that. Thought he was being rude. Cause as far as I've read she didn't have any defect in walking or mounting her horse. So it kind of came out of the blue

    "How is your body?" He knows that it is a sensitive topic for her but he can't help to ask. This way he can show the girl that he cared about her.
    The Majesty And The Red Dragon
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