Comments of chapter undefined of WILDBLOOD

Good introduction 👌🏻

Powerful writing ! something new, something different. Make my heart to begin pounding with excitement to what's coming up.

Despite the few grammar errors here and there, this truly seems promising! I’m excited to read more!!

This chapter was a great introduction and setup compelling mysteries. I'm interested to know more about this world you have set up. The one critism that I have is that I feel like towards the end of the chapter the grammar and sentence structure began to fall apart. This was surprising to me since the beginning of the chapter had such strong prose and had little to none grammar mistakes.

What good description and introduction, nice work! but it still bother me that there was a car for some reason, I hope to read more about this story setting!

Just saw this on the new release. Going to read more. I already like the details in first chapter excited for the next.

A very interesting chapter.

See this! I just gifted the story: 10 COINS

See this! I just gifted the story: 10 COINS

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Oh I like this chapter a lot. It gives me thrill's. I like how she was brave to act not stupid to run crazily in that area. Like one could easily walk and the last part is also good. A cliffhanger! Excellent work Author. I liked it!

This chapter was long but I really enjoyed every detail in this solely chapter. I mean hey author you did great making me come to read next!!!

That's interesting, its giving me vibes of Supernatural