This is very well written, i am pleasantly surprised. The only thing is recommended is that you reread some of your chapters for grammar errors. Itās small things but iāve noticed you repeatedly spell Moss like Mos sometimes. Other than that keep up the good work Author.
I said it before and Iāll say it again, I really like Fox. I wish he stuck around with Jonathan but itāll take a while for him to betray and leave Mechanical Dawn.
Thanks for the Chapter!