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there is an al powerful western continent in real life that’s why 🇺🇸
what are krath again?
this is a very novel idea. There are many cliche reasons an MC may want to be strong. But after reading hundreds of webnovels the simple idea of what to mean something in a universe of meaninglessness is refreshing to see.
his shadows would freeze in time if they leave his body
you can condense your lines, like the “in the end” and “the lord was alone” those don’t need to be separated
be careful what you wish for
Great story at the beginning. I loved what you had going on. But when you started connecting it to your other books and making it more serious than it needed to be, it really lost my attention. What you had was working very well and I believe that it would have been a lot better if you kept it separate from your other books and kept it more silly.
maybe it was 12 hours on Earth but 2 years on Arora?
I just realized that Nicks power only doesn’t work with humans because if the sun is a spectre then he is constantly under surveillance of it and his power still works
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