athass_prkr
my only disappointment is that Harry is dense in "romance." Like in this chapter, Daphne CLEARLY hinted at her crush, and he just went: "....what do you mean?" When in the previous chapters, he remarked about his awareness of the said crush. even if he is slowly starting to forget his former life, i think he should be able to get the hints, especially because he is portrayed as a genius and not some average loser(i mean myself). to be honest, i wouldn't be surprised if he turns out to be asexual. But considering some subtex, i guess either there is a plot point that includes Harry and Daphne's relationship, or it will be explored later in the story for some other reason. It is a great story, and i can't wait to see how you write the romance aspect it. Thanks for the chapter 🙏
Thanks for the chapter. But I have to admit, even when I first saw the idea of crests, I was a bit disappointed. It's basically a shortcut for the casual witches and wizards to have access to powerful spells. It doesn't feel deserved and it also removes the little bit of equality present in the wizarding world. I would have much preferred tomes or books kept by the family for the children to learn than crests that grant power.
I mean it kind of makes sense if you are really good at magic that even the simplest spells can be used to a deadly factor. I think he should start doing a whisper campaign against Dumbledore. There is a lot of secret Dumbledore has, and remember it doesn’t always have to be true just has to be believable. Go after his supporters Hagrid is an easy target. If he can protect his supporters, less people will come to his aid.