Don't tell me it's the commander's mother Tafail banged. Oh my! Will have to read this in app. They are many paragraph's I wanted to comment on but, alas, it's web. Author, you're amazing.
Tufail's an interesting protagonist... Although I've only seen the drunk aide of him, and I'm expecting to see a cool side of someone who seems like he's laready an OP adventurer. looking forward to more!
So far, the first chapter is great. The word choice and scenery was written in a way I can visualize everything.
The mother part made me laugh a little too hard. 😂😂
