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Comments of chapter undefined of His Toxic Addiction

Sharon_Rose18
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Lizbella
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Hey guys,how beautiful is our Arissa??

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chenemi
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I love it! can I suggest using grammarly(the free version) to edit your work? there are some places where spaces are needed and makes it quite hard to read but overall this a good first chapter.

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Metal_Alex
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finally found some interesting novel

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Xplorewit_Mimi
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I love your story plot development, Lizbella. Keep it rolling.

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UrekSenpa1
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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Zied_Younis
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Loved it, pretty good start i can tell though I don't read much romance <3

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evadata
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so this Arezza not Marie the FL beautiful ans feisty love har

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Sky_Li_9922
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Nice chapter!! A little bit of editing is needed, but the starting chap was great! can't wait to know more about Arissa❤️❤️

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DaoistkohgQm
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she is so beautiful

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GotMilkBlendS
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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Christine_Ambrose
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it very intriguing

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Crown_Nyx
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Crown_Nyx
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Great Start!

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Jayden222
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Nice start

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Lilc_77
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It's a good introduction to our main FL. Though the FL seems more like an Antagonist just because she's being all haughty when there's no need towards her driver and her mother so she seems like an Anti-hero? Also, if you can explain who this Richard is more, it would be better. It's just confusing on who/why he would buy her a motorcycle. But overall, great job 👍Keep up the great work

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Ebest
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A good start. Bravo to the author. A bit of Words development needed.

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Mystic_Fantasy73
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Anju_Singh_6730
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Good start so far .

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NewbieJimjim
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Nice introduction!

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HADES
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