Comments of chapter undefined of Fairy Tail: Shinigami

You know I read most of your fics and even been a patreon for don't know how long but in a way you using such a cliche with the parent's death and being a slave just means you could not think about more original progress or such why all fics use the same cliche idk just cheap character development.

Thanks for the chapter.

I can't call this a lazy development as it works for the history right now, the parents weren't that important in the 2 chapters the dad was completely non-existent and the mother was a link to the doctor, a doctor that only role in the history was to show us the reader the MC reiatsu. So i feel the history is moving forwards using all resources it has at hand good work author. This even open the possibility of meeting Erza even before Fairy tail.

Great chapter

Thanks for the chapter.

This feels lazy

Garbage and cliche af. Took no creativity or brain power to just kill off parents and make slave. Like come on.

idk man, even if you just spend few years with your new parents you would still nurture love for them. kinda weird why he just took it like its a normal thing to happen like.. its too forced and bland? mc: guess they ded, meh ???

Man, this thing really happened, I'm getting reluctant to continue... I'm really disappointed for you if you do this just because of Erza -_-

Thanks

Gud

Thank you for the chapter 🥰

Thx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Tank yu for the chapter.

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gracias por el capitulo

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