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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
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    One suggestion if you can see this. Instead of writing every action/event as a summary, have moments where the story slows down for a bit. for example, don't summarize his thoughts all the time, you can use single quotation marks or italics to show what he's thinking. That way we can get better acquainted with the MC and it adds depth to his character.

    Ch 9 Caught in the Middle
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    NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN/AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    This feels lazy

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 - Forgotten Slaves.
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    Fairy Tail: Shinigami
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented
    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - New World.
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    Fairy Tail: Shinigami
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Replied to Jayetheus

    I still don't know why people are so apprehensive of it

    Ch 16 I'm Getting Goosebumps
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    I'm Actually Not Overpowered!
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Replied to THII_EXTERNAL
    Ch 3 [Emilia]
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    [Nightmare]
    Fantasy · Margrave
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    Still waiting for eth to turn into evil ren

    Ch 47 Changes [2]
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    The Extra's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Ryukurou
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Replied to Tee_hee

    In this case, he didn't have much of a choice. I honestly don't really mind the protagonist since he's cool in most cases. The ones I do mind, are the heroines and the annoying side characters

    Ch 23 Demonstration [2]
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    The Extra's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Ryukurou
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Replied to GENTLE_RAIN

    They would be too broken

    Ch 30 Unlocking Sixth Sense
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    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    Here's your engagement Roy: Kotowaru!

    Ch 21 The Truth!
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    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Replied to iwantasystem

    That happens in real life too

    Ch 11 Ridiculous!
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    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Replied to NinjaDragony

    Essentially an ability a transmigrator gains from the transmigration process, usually due to surviving the contact with void/chaos

    Ch 7 Stabbed!
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    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    I'm still waiting for that protagonist who will refuse to go to the academy, assuming the plot takes place there

    Ch 35 Academy invitation
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    Interesting

    Ch 1 One Bad Day That Got Worse #1
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    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    Kid Madara stomps ez

    Ch 5 Facing an Angry Mob
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    Madara in the Avatar World
    Anime & Comics · KojiSan
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    Interesting...

    Ch 1 A Voice in the Dark
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    Madara in the Avatar World
    Anime & Comics · KojiSan
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    Ban...kai!

    Ch 10 The Most Suitable SSS Class
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    Author Got an SSS Class to Fight His Own MC
    Fantasy · Herolich
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas1yr
    Commented

    How interesting...

    Ch 2 Open the Gifts!
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    Author Got an SSS Class to Fight His Own MC
    Fantasy · Herolich
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas2yr
    Commented

    Exp

    Ch 22 The Second Customer
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas2yr
    Commented

    Exp

    Ch 13 Pay! Now!
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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Irrin_Avitas
    Irrin_Avitas2yr
    Commented

    I like the start...

    Ch 1 The Shadow Atop The Windowsill
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    Combat Maid Harem
    Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
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