Comments of chapter undefined of Dark Romance Chronicles: Secrets We Keep

Ooh, I'm getting the devil wears prada vibes!

I will give my opinion to this chapter, this chapter is great, however Alisha's inner monologue about her nervousness and low self-esteem was too long. It would be great if you convey it in a shortened but effective way. It would be good if you add body language too, so the characters are more alive.

well written, but as our discord server knows I'm a lil sensitive to present tense writing... suddenly switched xD

I'm so eager to know more about the 'Dragon Lady'

Had to skim through this cause I couldn't bring myself to read it. What's up? The previous chapters were alright but this is just....

Dragon Lady a perfect name. we in our office also name our superior in such ways xD relatable!!

Haha can't wait to see what Dragon Lady has install for her (still crossing my fingers for her)

It suddenly switched to present-tense...