Agent_047
I was wondering when you would have them capture the guy who shot Aron. I'm glad you didn't stretch it out over many chapters, just 1 where the capture was the main focus, a paragraph in this one to show his arrival in eden/avalon, and I expect 1 or 2 more chapters to cover what they learn from scanning his brain and then whatever punishment he is given. The war is wrapping up, so I assume what is learned will lead to what happens next.