Comments of chapter undefined of Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

My theory: The reason why the server was down or whatever, is probably because the civilization there was destroyed. And as their last hope to continue their legacy and get revenge on the enemy, they decided to send the system away somewhere where it could develop som monkey into galactical hero and save the day.

this story has potential but needs some serious proofreading

slow & steady I like it

Thanks for the chap

this story is nice.

Do you really think that 100 Push up's 100 Crunches 100 Squat and 10 km run daily will make you strong?? Bro you forgot 100 pull up's. 50% of success is sport is rich and healthy food and sleep. And by doing so much sport from the beginning you will kill your own body... And in a long term this amount of activity is nothing much it will not reach your full potential. That's why it is stupid.

skimmed. what an info dump. Like im sure author was making sure we slept for 2 days straight

I don’t feel like reading this anymore the title of the novel is misleading advanced technology and magic tech is different and the grammar needs a lot of work thanks for the read but by.

there's a whole lot of, what did that mean and what did this mean, going on here that I feel confused even trying to explain the problem.

Not sure if anyone has told you but 'dept' is short for 'department' - what you mean to type is 'debt' - i.e. an amount of money outstanding and owed.