Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
Marvel: I'm a Symbiote
Addyctive7
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The first 100 chapters of the fic were good, but it started to get boring towards the end. First of all, I don't understand what the author is and your obsession with Gwen. Okay, Gwen is a good female character, there's nothing bad about that. Author, you want your MC to have a relationship with 3 Gwens in total. I understand the 1st and 2nd, but with the 3rd I'm starting to think you're totally obsessed with Gwen. I understand that you like Gwen, but this is a bit of an exaggeration. I like Gwen too, but MJ and Felicia are on the same level. In my opinion, they are not much different from them. Everyone who reads the comics knows that Gwen cheated on Peter with Norman and had 2 children with him, and that those children killed Peter. I remember the Marvel writers fixed this recently, but I'm not sure. Secondly, author, you write too many dominant and sadistic lemons. It was nice to read at first, but towards the end it started to bore me because there were so many scenes like this. Add some variety. Lastly, the author explores very little of the other Worlds. We discovered 4-5 worlds in the first 100 chapters and I enjoyed reading it, but in the chapters after that, we discover very few worlds and this gets boring. I understand that you want to write the background of the first worlds you discover and the interactions between characters. But you focus so much on those worlds. Let's explore some new worlds, there are at least 30 worlds we haven't discovered. Anyway, the author said, overall, the fic is well written. Thanks for the chapter and this comment has been translated
