I didn't like this fan fic when I first read it. It didn't give me a Game of Thrones vibe. MC was a bit naive and optimistic in my opinion, but now I'm enjoying reading this fic in the last chapters. People complain about drama but this is Westeros. Without drama, this fic wouldn't be a Game of Thrones fic. thanks for the episode

We're talking about a bastard here. Many, if not all, members of the Stark family may take such actions against Jon at Catelyn's direction. Since Jon is a bastard of Ned, he will always be a thorn in Catelyn's heart and she will satisfy herself with such methods.

I've read 100 chapters so far and overall I found this fic to be between 3-3.5. First of all, the fic gets very boring in some places. It mostly happens in places where he performs heroic acts. where the normal life fic is good. Where the hero life fic goes bad. There are interesting events in his normal life and it made me read the fic up to 100 chapters. Except for a few things about the heroic life, most of it is very bad. There is a very bland hero's life narrative and there are almost no interesting events. My first complaint is that the MC pays too much attention to Justice League. Let me give an example. MC doesn't kill criminals, he imprisons them because he wants to be on good terms with the Justice League. If he's going to pay attention to Justice League, then he should spend more time with Justice League. He has very little interaction with the characters in Justice League. Another problem is that MC has a scary and cold appearance in his hero form, but his attitudes do not match this appearance. If his attitude is going to be like this, it would be better to adjust his appearance accordingly. I never liked it like this. and finally hila accepting the marriage proposal is where this fic ends for me. It wouldn't be a problem if barbara, kara or nina started a relationship with him. Because her relationships with the characters were developed and well written, it is very illogical to start with Hila, who only has a few scenes and very few interactions. Here the character proves to us that he is a slave of the system precisely because the system promises him a reward and he allows the system to intervene in his life. and he agrees to marry a girl he doesn't know very well. He could have refused and the system would have given him no punishment. In fact, she could have accepted the marriage proposal after improving their relationship, but she did not do this, she saw that it would be a reward and accepted it directly. He started Harem from the worst choice. I love reading harem fics, but here the harem started with the worst choice and this caused me to finish the fic. Anyway, there are a few points I don't like, but I don't feel like going on too long. In general, in my opinion, the fic is very bland and boring except for a few interesting things in terms of story. I didn't like it but you might like it. So if you're curious, you can try it. maybe you like it. Thank you to the writer for your efforts. In general, I didn't like it, but since I saw your effort here, I will give this fic 4 points.(Translated)

I think he was either Dumbledore or Hiruzen in one of his past lives.

Süpermen'in gözlükleri tanrılar tarafından yapılmış ekipmanlardır xd

There are a lot of blonde and blue-eyed people named Kara

I loved the development of the story. It's realistic and there's something I want to say. Come on, this is a magical medieval world, political marriages are a normal thing in that world. You should have expected this before starting this story. It's the right decision both pragmatically and emotionally. Put yourself in MC's place and do you think you have the will to sit on that throne with the blood of millions of people on your hands. you will be broken. I don't understand people, you can't criticize a good fic so much just because you don't like Harem. I understand if you don't like the fic at first, but don't make bad comments just because it has a Harem. I love reading Harem fics and I also read non-Harem ones if they have a good story. But I wouldn't make a bad comment just because there is no Harem. I would like to thank the author. Don't pay too much attention to other people. This incident seemed very realistic and logical to me.

When reading hentai, I try not to pay too much attention to the plot. The reason for this is that this family's hentai is my first hentai. A friend of mine suggested it and warned me that you might be traumatized. I didn't give it much thought either. At that time, I didn't understand Japanese words like netorare. There were ntr tags in the tags and I didn't understand them either. Anyway, when I started reading hentai, I thought it had a normal and decent story. I didn't understand why my friend was exaggerating so much. After arriving at the beach scene, I understood the real story. I hate leaving something unfinished, so I read the whole story and finished it. And in the end, I found myself questioning the characters and everything "why? why? WHY?" At that time, I had a little trauma because of this hentai.(translated)

Boyfriends in the ntr world are always stupid. So the main character is not at fault here, he tried to help.

I'm glad I could help. In recent fanfictions, relationships move very quickly and they quickly end their relationships with just a few implausible events. This also seems less realistic to me, and this is true of both harem and non-harem genres. I read both genres (I read Harem mostly). And they both have well-written relationships, but there are also poorly written ones. The last fanfiction I read that has a nice relationship is Meta Essence Gacha and that fanfiction has a harem. The relationships in this fic make a lot of sense and are well written. I think it's a very well written fanfiction. I recommend you read it and you can get reference from there.(translated)

I just started reading comics. You're right, there are actually all kinds of versions of a character in comics. I just get a little annoyed when a character strays from their established personalities. Things like fling are not something that happens very often around me and I still haven't gotten used to such events. I'm from Central/West Asia and since my culture has not a little tolerance for such events, such events don't happen very often. In our culture, we always approach relationships seriously, so I found it a little strange. I read their fiction out of curiosity about the culture of foreign countries, and I couldn't get used to it because there were many things I found strange. I'm sorry if I disturbed you.(translated)

I liked the fiction. I loved the development of his personality. The story of him slowly developing a human emotion from an indifferent person was nice in terms of character development. I'd say it's very similar to MC Beyonder. Their personalities are just a little different. MC seems knowledgeable, indifferent, mature compared to Beyonder, and a character with an interest in the world. There is an idea in fiction that I can suggest. It's good that he gained emotions because of his body in the first place. I think it would be nonsense to say that he started to gain emotions because of kara. Changing your personality emotionally because of a girl you've known for 1-2 weeks is nothing but nonsense. Now I think it would be better if these feelings did not develop only with kara. It would be better for other characters to help develop emotions in MC, and I would prefer it to go slowly. If you just continue with Kara, MC will become a simp (slave) who is very emotionally attached to Kara at the end of the fiction. It is better not to see Kara, someone she has only known for 1-2 weeks, as a friend or not to try to save her. If you want to develop their relationship as the story progresses, you can, but right now their relationship is too shallow. Thank you for chapter(translated)

DC's clone technology is not as annoying as Marvel's. There are crazy people in Marvel who can make an army out of your clones. You may even find perverts who clone your girl version. Or you can have clones that can replace you the next day. You can even find bastards who are immortal with cloning technology in Marvel. I think Marvel's cloning technology is more annoying

The tension is very high in the first parts of the story, so it can be a little annoying, but overall it is a good plot and most people complain that the lace is too weak. But it is just the beginning of the fiction and the main character does not have all the power of Dante and he needs to gain exp to have all the power of Dante. There is a tag from weak to strong in fiction. That is, it is stated in advance that the main character is weak at the beginning. This is the Marvel Universe and anything can happen at any time. That's why I think the tension at the beginning of the story makes a lot of sense.

Brother, this is the wrong universe. This is Marvel and heroes have no problem killing.

Since mutant is a word specific to the Marvel universe, I am not against the use of this word. The word 'mutant' may sound racist, but it is a word that summarizes the situation of mutants in the Marvel Universe. Words such as metahuman, espers, supers are specific to other fiction, and mutants in the Marvel universe obtain their powers through the mutation of their genes.

For the first time, I want to leave a fic because of a name.

It kind of makes sense that Kyle is this strong. Let's take Captain America as an example, he has at least 10 tons of lifting power because a helicopter stopped in the 2nd movie. And normal bullets shouldn't hurt Captain America too much. The reason for avoiding normal bullets is that they leave small wounds that hurt and make it difficult to focus in battle. For example, in the Battle of New York, Captain America was able to resist the energy attacks with his own body, and then his wound healed for a few minutes. This shows that he has a low level healing factor. Captain America is a character who has the power and potential to defeat a small country as long as he has enough equipment in World War II, where technology is not very developed. Now Kyle is 1.5-2 times stronger than Captain America, he has both a healing factor and a Venom symbiote. So Kyle can infiltrate Japan, kill the emperor, and even create turmoil in the country and weaken the power of the country, but he cannot defeat Japan alone. because 1000-10000 heavily armed people can easily kill Kyle. All it takes is a few human bombs to get close to Kyle and boom, the symbiote will be disabled and Kyle will be seriously injured. Even with the healing factor, as long as the other soldiers are not stupid, kyle will be finished. (translated)

It's not that terrible of an ending, but it's not a very good ending, it's an average ending. I think the story was very rushed. I think the biggest problem with your stories is all of them. After a while, things like quickly becoming too strong and accordingly too many plot errors in the story happen. I think it would be better for your fiction if you make character development slowly in your future fiction. thank you for writing this fic

Reed is always like this, it's the same in the comics. The man deserves to be deceived. He doesn't spare any time for his own family environment. If it weren't for the writers in the comics, Sue would have left Reed and been with Namor. Which girl wants to be with a guy who doesn't show interest in you? and reed is a character who literally does things that could destroy the world or the universe