Comments of chapter undefined of Psionic (Marvel)

If you're going to willingly show off powers you should at least stop lying about it right after... He's trying to act cool/mysterious and failing. If he was serious about keeping things secret then he wouldn't have shown his increased strength in the first place.

This story is basically like that new Velma show, the characters are nothing like their original counterparts, the OG Scooby-Doo gang. just using their names to get people interested. gag. this story won't last long if it keeps this up.

Good chapter. I don’t think I’d get into these Tekken/Mortal Kombat/Pokémon battles if I were a mutant in the X-Men. I feel as though it would get super competitive with really bad feelings going around. You’d have a bunch of people like Katsuki Bakugo from BNHA and Vali from DXD yelling, “Fight me!”. It’d be a whole lot smarter to have the Danger Room provide the opponents so there’s no hard feelings. Even worse, they have their pride on the line. Peter would have to get beat up in front of his newly reunited sister, his teammates in the X-Men, and all these people he’s known for years. Andrew would have to get beat up in front of all these friends he just made. Charles Xavier is a moron for allowing fights like this. I feel as though if this were the real world, there would be too much bad blood. It’d be like having an in-house fight club and MMA circuit in a communal living situation with a bunch of hormonal teens. What could go wrong?

Show real evil mc

I think the quality of the story has improved a bit more, the characters are more expressive, I still think that MC should have a more interesting and realistic objective, stories of MC trying to be the strongest in the universe tend to be terrible and unrealistic, like a human reaches the level of the one above all without the help of a system even if the MC knows all the Marvel enhancement points he still wouldn't even be able to move Puera from the clothes of someone of the beyonder level, I like it better when the MC stays there at the level of Thor or Odin at the most, even more so if you're talking about the MCU, when it goes beyond that the story most of the time gets boring at least that's how it is for me. I'm only going to rate the story after fifty or more chapters, but so far the story is going well, of course it could improve, but it probably needed to be rewritten, the way the MC was presented was done in a way that the reader would not manage to get attached to him maybe later on you will be able to develop the personality in a more complete way, his interaction with other characters is also very weak and makes it even more difficult in a character evolution and even a certain maturity.

Keep going please 🤩

Nice chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the good chapter 👍👍👍

Tank yu for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter

Thxs for the chap

gracias por el capitulo

thx for the chap

So if he's a psionic, can't he just use superboy's version of Tactile Telekinesis to enhance his physical stats??

thanks for the chapter ☺️

Thanks for the chapter 👍

who is the love interest

Thanks for the great chapter!!!

Thx